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Band 6.5

You have a problem with a neighbour. Write a letter to your neighbour. In your letter: describe the problem say how long it has been a problem explain what action you want the neighbour to take ​

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Dear Sir, I am writing
this
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 letter to draw your attention towards the predicament of loud music noise which I hear from your house and it often ruins my sleepy nights almost every day. No worthless, we have resided in your neighbourhood for a long time without any interruption,
however
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Usage of linking words is important in IELTS writing. They help create clear connections between ideas in your writing. They improve the flow of your essay by showing relationships between paragraphs and sentences. Using appropriate linking words demonstrates your ability to write cohesively and will help you achieve a higher band score.

, since the
last
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Usage of linking words is important in IELTS writing. They help create clear connections between ideas in your writing. They improve the flow of your essay by showing relationships between paragraphs and sentences. Using appropriate linking words demonstrates your ability to write cohesively and will help you achieve a higher band score.

 couple of weeks ,the high volume music disturbs me and it is played from evening to midnight . Because of
this
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Usage of linking words is important in IELTS writing. They help create clear connections between ideas in your writing. They improve the flow of your essay by showing relationships between paragraphs and sentences. Using appropriate linking words demonstrates your ability to write cohesively and will help you achieve a higher band score.

 issue, I am unable to get sufficient naps throughout the entire night .
Conversely
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Usage of linking words is important in IELTS writing. They help create clear connections between ideas in your writing. They improve the flow of your essay by showing relationships between paragraphs and sentences. Using appropriate linking words demonstrates your ability to write cohesively and will help you achieve a higher band score.

, I would appreciate it if you could stop playing
such
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Usage of linking words is important in IELTS writing. They help create clear connections between ideas in your writing. They improve the flow of your essay by showing relationships between paragraphs and sentences. Using appropriate linking words demonstrates your ability to write cohesively and will help you achieve a higher band score.

 loud music , especially on weekdays, or I will have to call the police to overcome the issue .No doubt it can
also
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Usage of linking words is important in IELTS writing. They help create clear connections between ideas in your writing. They improve the flow of your essay by showing relationships between paragraphs and sentences. Using appropriate linking words demonstrates your ability to write cohesively and will help you achieve a higher band score.

 affect our relationship . I am looking forward to hearing from you back. Yours Sincerely Saman

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task achievement
Consider revising some phrases to make your intentions clearer, such as explaining the impact of the noise on your daily life more explicitly.
coherence and cohesion
Make sure to use linking words or phrases to enhance flow between your paragraphs, which will improve the overall coherence of your letter.
task achievement
Your letter has a polite tone, which is suitable for addressing a neighbor.
coherence and cohesion
You clearly describe the problem and how long it has been affecting you, providing context for your request.

Word Count

IELTS says that you should write a minimum of 150 words in writing task 1. If you go under word count you will lose marks in task response.

A very long letter will not give you a higher band score.

Aim for between 160 to 190 words in writing task 1. This will ensure a concise letter and will be realistic in terms of time management. You have only 20 minutes to write the letter and you need around 5 minutes of planning time, so you will not be able to write a long letter in 15 minutes.

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