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The map below shows the plan of a proposed new town. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The map below shows the plan of a proposed new town. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The schematic map Represented shows the layout of a new
city
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. Regarding the
city
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 plot, it appears that the
city
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 is going to be 3 parts, the
City
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 centre, the centre's surroundings and
finally
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, the outskirts.
Furthermore
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, the inside of the town seems to be divided by a ring road shaping the
city
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's interior as a circle and pointing other roads diagonally.
Also
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, the
city
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 centre is only facilitated by transportation accommodations like parking lots and a bus stop.
However
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, its surroundings lack these facilities and contain houses, but include recreational spaces.
In contrast
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, The outside space of the town has no accommodating provisions and it is more industrial leading to it having two Industry lands, one on the northwest of the
city
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as well as
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 the other one located in the southeast region. The other part of the exterior is filled with housings.
To sum up
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, the
city
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 has three regions and looks like a circle with the facilities being more dense inwards.

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Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
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Basic structure: Change the fourth paragraph.
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Basic structure: Change the fifth paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words city with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Only 4 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fifth paragraph.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • residential housing
  • ring road
  • local roads
  • commercial zones
  • inhabitants
  • transportation system
  • bus terminals
  • train stations
  • recreational areas
  • sports facilities
  • educational institutions
  • schools
  • libraries
  • accessibility
  • industrial zones
  • outskirts
  • noise and pollution
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