The graph shows the income of four cafes in New York over the last year. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparison where relevant.

The graph shows the income of four cafes in New York over the last year. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparison where relevant.
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The graph presents data regarding the yearly income pattern of four New York
café
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s which reports numbers in thousand-dollar intervals. All data shows that The Tea Room experienced a downward trend during the year
while
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both Internet Express maintained a steady performance with late growth and WiFi Café and Café Cool showed steady growth patterns. The Tea Room's monthly revenue started out at $160,000 in January, peaked at $180,000 in March, and
then
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fell to $60,000 by December. For the majority of the year, Internet Express's revenues remained in the range of $80,000 to $100,000.
However
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, in December, it reached its maximum point
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$140,000, making it the best-performing establishment. Over the course of the year, both WiFi Café and Café Cool saw a steady increase in sales; WiFi Café's revenue went from $40,000 to $80,000,
while
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Café Cool's revenue surpassed that of The Tea Room to reach $100,000 annually.

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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
Vocabulary: Replace the words café with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "shows" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "data" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "growth" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "reached" was used 2 times.
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