The map below show the changes of a school from 1985 to the present time. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The map below show the changes of a school from 1985 to the present time. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
IELTS Writing Task Chart for The map below show the changes of a school from 1985 to the present time. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
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The map illustrates the transformations of a
school
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between 1985 and
present
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the present
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day.
Overall
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, the
school
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faced an increase in student population and an advancement in infrastructure. On taking a closer look, the car park, which is located on the front side of the
school
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, has been reduced in size over the years
also
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the road which connects the car park to the playing field has disappeared
while
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the playing field faced a reduction in area.
Furthermore
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, the classrooms, which
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then
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located on either side of the
school
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, expanded in size and the classroom block on the right got another storey. By probing
further
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, the library, which is on the left side of the
school
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, got converted into the learning resources
center
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centre
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and now even has a computer room indicating the modernisation of the
school
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.
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, the
school
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now has a pool
as well as
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a fitness centre and
thus
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students now can enjoy a plethora of
sport
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options.
On the other hand
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, the office , which is located
on
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in
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the top left corner of the
school
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remained the same throughout the time period.

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