In today's world, longevity
are
more likely to be seen in Change the verb form
is
people
than Use synonyms
the
past. The ageing community has some positive and negative impacts on society. It is considered by some Change preposition
in the
inviduals
that Correct your spelling
individuals
longevity
of Correct article usage
the longevity
population
has disadvantages to governments, Correct article usage
the population
while
others believe that there are more advantages of ageing. Linking Words
This
essay will discuss both the benefits and drawbacks of Linking Words
this
issue.
On the one hand, Linking Words
governmnents
should shoulder Correct your spelling
governments
responsibility
of elderly Add an article
the responsibility
people
, with taking care of their health and giving them pensions. Use synonyms
In other words
, if there are more Linking Words
old-age
Correct your spelling
older
people
, governments should allocate more money from their budget to cover needs. Use synonyms
Therefore
, governments can face some financial difficulties and have to cope with these problems. Linking Words
furthermore
, these money-related issues can lead to more serious hardships Linking Words
such
as damaging the economy of the country. Linking Words
For example
, Japan allot two times more money than Russia because Japan has more elderly Linking Words
people
.
Use synonyms
On the other hand
, ageing Linking Words
people
can be crucial for elderly Use synonyms
people
's relatives and Use synonyms
friend
. To be more specific, they can spend more time with their family, grandchildren and friends. Old-aged Fix the agreement mistake
friends
people
can be seen Use synonyms
special
by those who love them. they are respected and taken care Change preposition
as special
by
their family. Change preposition
of by
In addition
to Linking Words
this
, they Linking Words
also
have Linking Words
chance
to travel Correct article usage
a chance
different
places and gain more experience and Change preposition
to different
thus
they can share their experience and give Linking Words
an
important Correct article usage
apply
advices
to young Change the wording
advice
pieces of advice
bits of advice
people
. Use synonyms
For instance
, children can want to hear some stories from their grandparents' youth and it is possible to Linking Words
broden
Correct your spelling
broaden
horizons
Correct pronoun usage
their horizons
with
learning some information about the past times and old traditions.
In conclusion, taking all the mentioned points into account, Change preposition
by
although
Linking Words
people
have different views about Use synonyms
this
Linking Words
arguement
, in my opinion, there are more Correct your spelling
argument
the
advantages of ageing than disadvantages and these disadvantages can be solved in future.Correct article usage
apply
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