The diagram below shows the manufacturing process for making sugar from sugar cane. Summerise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The diagram below shows the manufacturing process for making sugar from sugar cane. Summerise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
IELTS Writing Task Chart for The diagram below shows the manufacturing process for making sugar from sugar cane. Summerise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The chart displays the generating operation for producing
sugar
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from
sugar
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canes
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cane
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.
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, the operating process includes 7 steps . First , the process starts with growing the
sugar
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canes
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cane
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,
this
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usually takes about 12 to 18 months . After the
sugar
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canes
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are fully developed , they are harvested in either of the two variant ways . Some are harvested by humans , others are harvested by specialised machines .
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, the
sugars
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sugar
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canes
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are placed in the crushing machine where they are smashed
untill
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until
forming a special juice . In the fourth step , the liquid mixture developed is placed in a limestone filter where it is
fertlised
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fertilised
.
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, the filtered juice is placed in a huge pan where it is exposed to high heat
untill
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until
it reaches the evaporating point and
develop
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develops
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syrup which
contain
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contains
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sugar
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crystals .
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, these
sugar
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crystals are
seperated
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separated
from the syrup by an operation called
centrifuge
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a centrifuge
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Lastly
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, the
sugar
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crystals are dried and cooled down and form the
sugar
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that we use .

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Conclusion: The conclusion is too long.
Vocabulary: Replace the words sugar, canes with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Only 4 basic words for charts were used.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • Manufacturing process
  • Harvesting
  • Transporting
  • Processing plant
  • Washing
  • Crushing
  • Boiling
  • Concentration
  • Purification
  • Crystallization
  • Cooling process
  • Packaging
  • Distribution
  • Sustainability
  • Efficiency
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