The charts below show the changes in the ownership of electrical appliances and amount of the time spent doing housework in households in one country between 1920 and 2019.

The charts below show the changes in the ownership of electrical appliances and amount of the time spent doing housework in households in one country between 1920 and 2019.
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The chart illustrates the correlation
betweent
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between
the ownership of electrical appliances and the
number
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of
hours
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spent doing housework in one particular country from 1920 to 2019. Units are measured in percentages and
hours
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.
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, it can be seen that the
number
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of electrical
divices
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devices
increased significantly over the given period. Meanwhile,
amount
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the amount
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of time which people spent on housework per household decreased dramatically.
To begin
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with, it can be observed that in 1920 nobody used
refrigerator
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refrigerators
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, after that their ubiquitousness rose considerably and in 1960 approximately 90% of households had
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appliance, before reaching a
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peak
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at 100% in 1980.
Likewise
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, the
number
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of vacuum cleaners increased greatly and reached 100% in 2000. With regard to
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the washing
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machine
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machines
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, at the start around 40% of
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the household
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household
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households
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had
this
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device,
then
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this
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figure fluctuated slightly and ,by the end,
this
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rate accounted for about 75%.
According to
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the chart, the
number
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of
hours
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of housework per week stood up
50
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at 50
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hours
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in 1920 and
then
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plunged to approximately 10
hours
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in 2010.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words number, hours with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "chart" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 4 times.
Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "approximately" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • ownership
  • electrical appliances
  • housework
  • time frame
  • variables
  • trends
  • significant milestones
  • turning points
  • correlation
  • reduction
  • influenced
  • societal implications
  • quality of life
  • gender roles
  • economic implications
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