The graph shows the income of four cafes in New York over the last year. Summmarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparision where relevant.

The graph shows the income of four cafes in New York over the last year. Summmarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparision where relevant.
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The chart describes data regarding the income pattern of four New York cafes, which report numbers in
thousand-dollar
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thousand dollars
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in a
year
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.
Overall
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, the data shows that the Tea Room witnessed a downward trend after the
year
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while
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both Internet Express, Wifi Cafe, and Cafe Cool had
increases
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increased
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. The Tea Room's revenue started at $160,000 in January, followed by reaching a peak at $180,000. The figure
remain
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remains
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stable at $140,000 for 7 months from April before a drop to $45,000 in December. For the majority of the
year
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, Internet Express's revenues remained in the range of $80,000 to $100,000. The figure
have
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has
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a
slightly
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slight
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in crease
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increase
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by the end of the
year
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and reached its maximum point
at
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of
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$140,000 in December. Both
income
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the income
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of WiFi Café and Café Cool saw a steady increase. WiFi Café's revenue stayed fluctual
arounf
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around
$40,000 to $100,000 before a
roket
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rise
to $190,000 by the end of the
year
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,
while
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Café Cool's revenue had
a
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the
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same state with a
groth
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growth
to $120,000 in December.

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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
Vocabulary: Replace the words year, café with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "data" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "increases" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "remain" was used 2 times.
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