The bar chart below shows the popularity of well-known Instagram accounts in 2018 and 2021. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The bar chart below shows the popularity of well-known Instagram accounts in 2018 and 2021. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The bar graph illustrates the popularity of famous Instagram accounts in 2018 and 2021.
Overall
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, the
followers
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of each
superstars
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seem to rise dramatically in 2021, hitting almost 2.5 times when compared to the previous 3 years. Back in 2018, Selena Gomez had the highest subscribers of about 125
million
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, followed by Cristiano Ronaldo and Ariana Grande with slightly over 100
million
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followers
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each. Meanwhile, Kylie Jenner seems hit 100
million
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in the period, leaving The Rock behind with around 5
million
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in different, and made him the least
followers
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in
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of
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all five characters.
However
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, in 2021, each actor and actress account an instant growth in Instagram
followers
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. Four of them, including The Rock, Ariana Grande, Kylie Jenner, and Selena Gomez, have reached 250
million
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followers
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accounts.
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, Cristiano Ronaldo had made a big
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, as he had surpassed 300
million
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subscribers in 2021, having the most Instagram
followers
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among the five influencers.

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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
Vocabulary: Replace the words followers, million with synonyms.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • bar chart
  • popularity
  • Instagram accounts
  • growth
  • decline
  • comparison
  • remained stable
  • significant change
  • new entries
  • exits
  • patterns
  • trends
  • noteworthy
  • notable
  • fluctuation
  • predominant
  • dominant
  • proliferation
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