The charts shows air pollution levels by different causes among four countries in 2021. Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

IELTS Writing Task Chart for The charts shows air pollution levels by different causes among four countries in 2021. Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The graph provides information about the levels of air pollution by different causes

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four countries in the world. The data was taken in 2021.

Overall

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, China had the highest number of all of the states, and the biggest toxin was in the industry sector.

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, Australia was the smallest contributor to environmental damage in 2021.

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, China had the biggest pollutants, they began from around 60

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in electricity generation, 70

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in the transport sector, and the widest toxin is industry, around 80

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, the pollutants caused by transportation in America had a similar count to the energy category in China.

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, the powerplant and manufacturing factor in America,

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the transportation in Japan had almost the same count, around 30

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, in Japan, the air contamination by business

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was highest, over 40,

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the lowest total was electricity generation. Technology in Japan already uses green energy.

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, Australia was the cleanest state of all. It had the smallest count of pollution. All of the sectors had almost the same amount, it was about 20

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Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 78%.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words ppm with synonyms.

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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "information" in your introduction.

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Vocabulary: The word "almost" was used 2 times.

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Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 2 times.

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Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 3 times.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 7.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

185 words

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