The graph show sources of air pollutants in the UK from 1990 to 2005

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The line chart illustrates the level of air pollutants in the United Kingdom, in units of tonnes,

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changes over time

Firstly

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, the total amount of airborne pollutants was 7 million

tons

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but steadily dipped until 1999 when it reached a marginal plateau and started to decline again up to 3

tons

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trend highlights the effectiveness of environmental policies

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implemented during

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period.

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, industrial pollutants constituted 5,5 million

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and progressively decreased until 1993,

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dropped abruptly before 1996. After that, the statistics

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off and continued to plummet.

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, households, despite the oscillating dynamic, started with the initial point of one million

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and almost fully eliminated air pollution by 2005.

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, starting from the same initial point as the households, transport, which experienced insignificant fluctuations, became the only factor on the graph that barely increased its influence on atmosphere pollution "positively"

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meeting the goal of 7 or more
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meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 7.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

3 paragraphs

150 words

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