Children have more and more tests and exams to do at school, sometimes starting from the age 5 or 6, right up until age of 18. What are the advantages and disadvantages of making children do exams?

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nowadays are getting

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holds both merits and demerits about

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essay,respectively. On the one hand,schools use

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as a method of knowing how much had the

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works as a contest for

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results show the

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that pupils put in is

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is essential for teaching,it helps teachers to keep on track with the learning progress of their

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sure that no children

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left behind.The concept of having

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recall their knowledge is really useful and it

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education.

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primary students would sometimes put tension on the students.

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are full of

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and creativity,so forcing them to do logical thinking

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talent in other aspects

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as arts or crafts which usually be left out.

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, those who are born as an infant prodigy

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than kids their age,but the large amount of knowledge took away their energy as a child.So it can be pointed out that,

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might not be suitable for infants as it is too much for them to handle. In general, competition

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helping the education industry but it should only be

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age as it shouldn't

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children's freedom.

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Language Accuracy

Ensure consistent punctuation and capitalization. For example, 'test' should be 'tests'.

Language Complexity

Refine sentence structure to improve clarity. Some sentences are a bit long and could be broken down for easier comprehension.

Task Achievement

Provide more specific examples to support your points. While the mention of prodigies is interesting, more concrete examples or data could enhance your argument.

Task Achievement

The essay presents both advantages and disadvantages of exams, which shows a balanced view of the topic.

Word Count

IELTS says that you should write a minimum of 250 words in writing task 2. If you go under word count you will lose marks in task response.

A very long essay will not give you a higher band score.

Aim for between 260 to 290 words in writing task 2. This will ensure a concise essay and will be realistic in terms of time management. You have only 40 minutes to write the essay and you need around 10 minutes of planning time, so you will not be able to write a long essay in 30 minutes.

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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

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Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

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Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

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Task Achievement: 5.0

Complete response

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4 paragraphs

246 words

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