The map below shows a school in 1985 and the school now. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The map below shows a school in 1985 and the school now. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
IELTS Writing Task Chart for The map below shows a school in 1985 and the school now. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
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The maps given illustrate the changes that have been place in a school from over a 40-year period from 1985 to the present day.
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, the school has experienced remarkable development to accommodate the increase in the number of students, including the removal of the library, the expansion of
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and the new introduction of sports and educational facilities. From 1985 until now, there has been a significant rise in the school’s enrollment, reaching a total of 2300 students. The southern part of the campus has been noticeably transforming, with a new pool and fitness centre in the west and new classrooms constructed in the northeast corner. In the north of the new sports facilities now
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a larger classroom, replacing the building that used to be next to the old library. The library has been converted to a new learning resource centre with a computer room, and the playing field is narrowing. Over the same period, in the eastern part of the school, the classroom block now has 3 storeys
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and a new green area has been introduced in place of a road.
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, the main road from the U-shape has been rebuilt into a curved shape.

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