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The chart below shows changes in the number of international students in Australia in 2019 and 2020. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The chart below shows changes in the number of international students in Australia in 2019 and 2020. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
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The chart below shows changes in the number of international
students
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 in
Australia
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 in 2019 and 2020.Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
Overall
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, there was a decrease in the number of international
students
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 from various countries studying in
Australia
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 in 2020 compared to 2019.
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China
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 had the highest
student
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 population in both years, followed by
India
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 and Nepal.
While
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Chine
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China
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 experienced a decline in
student
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numbers
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 in 2020,
India
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 and Nepal saw a slight increase. Vietnam, Brazil, and Malaysia had
comperativly
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comparatively
 lower
student
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numbers
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 in 2019, with varied changes in 2020. In 2019, China dominated the international
student
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 population in
Australia
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 with 159,000
students
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, significantly higher than
India
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, Nepal, Vietnam, Brazil, and Malaysia.
However
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, in 2020 Chinese
student
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numbers
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 declined to 150,000.
Conversely
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,
India
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 and Nepal experienced a rise in
student
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numbers
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 to 101,625 and 50,454, respectively.
In contrast
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, Vietnam had 39,000
students
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 in
Australia
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 in 2019, which
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increased
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 slightly to 38,025 in 2020. Brazil and
Australia
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 had
lowest
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the lowest
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numbers
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 of
students
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 in 2019, with 28,200 and 18,900 respectively.

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Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 100%.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words students, australia, student, india, numbers with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "shows" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "changes" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "changes" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "decline" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "slight" was used 2 times.
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