The line graph shows the average number of weekly patients visiting four clinics of a hospital from 2010 to 2016. Number of patients to four clinics in one hospital

The given chart presents information about the number of patients who weekly visit a hospital

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some reason like birth control,

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dental issues from 2010 to 2016.

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the number of patients visiting with

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, diabetic and dental problems increased over the given time period,

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birth control fluctuated and

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the same level for the same time recorded. In 2010, the proportion of people who visited a hospital with

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was in the middle level

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rose. The

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and diabetic issues increased moderately in 2012,

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of dental reduced gradually.

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the proportion of diabetic and dental problems fluctuated,

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rose substantially.

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, the proportion of birth control fluctuated from 2010 to 2016. In spite of a substantial drop in

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the

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reached the same level that was at the beginning of

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