Your are living in a university residence, and you have a problem with the high levels of Boise a letter campus restaurant Wich is open until midnight Write a letter to the governor of The University.In your letter

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Dear Sir or Madam I am writing to complain about the noise made by the restaurant, which

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until midnight. I am a student who lives in a University residence. It was the time to bring those problems to your attention to ensure the reputation of the famous university. Now, let me explain the issues one by one. The first thing I would like to draw your attention to is that The restaurant stays open until midnight, which creates a lot of noise.

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, loud music and people talking or laughing loudly disturb the peace. I am afraid that lack of sleep is affecting

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performance and mental health.

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, It is causing stress and discomfort for many students. I would be grateful if the restaurant reduced its operating hours, closing by 10 p.m.

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of midnight. I look forward to your reply and a resolution to my problem Yours faithfully, Tom Dillinger

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Consider providing more specific examples or details about how the noise affects your daily life or studying habits to strengthen your argument.

coherence and cohesion

Improve the overall flow by using more cohesive devices, such as linking words, to connect your ideas better between paragraphs.

coherence and cohesion

Make sure to use consistent capitalization for nouns, like 'restaurant' instead of 'The restaurant' in the second paragraph.

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The letter has a clear structure with an introduction, body, and conclusion, which is essential for effective communication.

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Your polite tone throughout the letter is appropriate for a formal complaint, showing respect towards the recipient.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 6.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

8 paragraphs

153 words

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