Tarnagul is a small town near Melbourne. The maps show the town's development over a period of time. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

Tarnagul is a small town near Melbourne. The maps show the town's development over a period of time. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The maps illustrate the changes made over a century, to a
town
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named Tarnagul located near Melbourne. The
town
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had undergone significant development. It was once an agricultural
town
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, but later it became a tourist spot.Major additions included a Wildlife Sanctuary, a local museum,a craft market and a tourist shop. In 1900, the
town
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had a dairy across the river, a field of oranges and an area for growing Mandarins.
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, in 1950, the dairy was replaced by the Lemons and Grapefruit farm.
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, some packing sheds and a railway line were constructed on the land that was empty earlier. A major development was done until in the year 2000, the area across the river had a Wildlife Sanctuary.A Museum,a craft market and a tourist shop were built where once there were packing sheds.
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, the railway tracks were removed, the
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area shrank and the majority of the orange fields became unused,
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, a small park was constructed in those areas.

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