The maps below show the centre of a small town called islip as it is now and plan for its development. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and to make comparisons where relevant to this data.

IELTS Writing Task Chart for The maps below show the centre of a small town called islip as it is now and plan for its development. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and to make comparisons where relevant to this data.

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The provided maps illustrate the middle of a small city Islip now and the diagram to improve it in the future.

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, it is planned to reconstruct the whole town centre,

therefore

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it will be almost completely different from how it is now.

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, nowadays, in the central part of

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it,

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there is a main

road

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on both sides of which there are shops. On the

north

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north,

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there is

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the

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countryside and on the

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north

noth

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noth,

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there are housings and

park

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parks

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on the eastern side and

school

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a school

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on the southern border which are connected to the main

road

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Secondly

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, by the plan, in the

middle

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middle,

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there will be a

road

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for pedestrians on both sides of which 2 new housings, car park, station and the mall will

be build

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be built

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Main

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The main

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road

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will go

round

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around

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the centre,

therefore

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, the park will get smaller,

however

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, the school will be increased.

To conclude

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, the city has tremendous plans for developing the centre and making it look better and be more practically convenient for people.

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that

plane

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plane,

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they will change everything except the shops from the southern side of the main

road

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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "therefore".

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Basic structure: Change the second paragraph.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words road with synonyms.

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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.

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meeting the goal of 7 or more
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Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 8.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

188 words

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The maps below show the centre of a small town called islip as it is now and plan for its development. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and to make comparisons where relevant to this data.

in many countries men and women are working full time it is therefore logical for both men and women to share their house hold tasks. to what extent do you agree or disagree?

"Prevention is better than cure" Out of a country's health budget, a large proportion should be diverted from treatment to spending on health education and preventive measures. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

Some schools prefer to teach specialised subjects to students after the age of 15, while others suggest that all the subjects should be taught throughout school life. What are the benefits of these 2 approaches? Which one is better, in your opinion?

Some people think that success in life comes from hard work and determination, while others think that there are more important factors such as money and appearance. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Some people believe that the government should provide free healthcare for all citizens. Other think that individuals should pay for their own medical costs. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.