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A museum near your home is looking for people to do part-time voluntary/unpaid work. You would like to do some voluntary/unpaid work at the museum. Write a letter to the museum director to apply for the voluntary/unpaid work. In your letter * explain why you want to do voluntary/unpaid work at the museum * describe some skills and qualities you have that would be useful * give details of when you would be available for work Opt to Spend no more than 20 minutes on this task.

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Dear sir,
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 letter is respectfully written to the manager of
City
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the City
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museum
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Museum
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 regarding the voluntary
work
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 which is advertised on
the
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apply
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Instagram.The reason I am interested
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in working
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work
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 in the City
museum
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Museum
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 of Toronto is the job background experience in Canada required
from
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by
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 the minister of immigration to fill in my permanent residency document
check list
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. As you may consider, my resume highlights
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my
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 previous
work
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 experience in
hospitality
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the hospitality
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 field in Dubai .
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, my language proficiency in five languages would definitely help me
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to
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 a tour-guiding position to lead tourists throughout their visit.
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 and probably the most, I have a full-time availability to start
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 position,
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, there is a deadline in 6 months to prove a 4-month
work
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 experience in my immigration documents.
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, I would appreciate
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 I could start in 2 months if the vacancy is still available. Looking forward to hearing from you With regards, Narges Amin

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Task Response
Include a clear introduction that outlines your purpose for writing. This helps frame the letter more effectively.
Coherence and Cohesion
Ensure that your paragraphs maintain a clear focus. You might want to separate your reasons for applying and your skills into different paragraphs.
Coherence and Cohesion
Use a more formal greeting like 'Dear Director' instead of 'Dear sir' if you do not know the name.
Task Response
Your multilingual skills and previous experience in hospitality are strong points that make your application stand out.
Task Response
You expressed a clear motivation for wanting to work at the museum, which adds to the overall strength of your application.
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