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Writing Samples
Band 4.5

Some people think that plastic shopping bags should be banned because they contribute to land and sea pollution. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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There is no denying the fact that
bags
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 made of non-recycling material should be terminated as they have a fundamental role in contributing to
pollution
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,
while
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 others believe that
its
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it
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cost
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effective
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 and convenient to use.
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, there is an argument that opposes it.
In my
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 opinion, I agree, that
palstic
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plastic
 shopping
bags
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 should be banned as they have a massive impact on the
enironment
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environment
 leading to
pollution
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 of land and
sea
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.
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 with, in many developing countries the use of
plastic
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have
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 endangered many of the marine life and ecosystems. Many
disposed
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disposed of
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plastic
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bags
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 have been found floating on rivers and over
sea
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 shores causing
sea
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pollution
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. Many of
which
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these
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 have been found entangling marine species leading to suffocation and much more digested by fish
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 not only affecting them, but
also
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 affecting humans that consume it. The more
diposed
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disposed
plastic
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 is found the more
pollution
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 is generated. Another point is that
,
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 there are many recyclable
form
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forms
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 of
bags
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 that are convenient to be used in place of
plastic
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.
For instance
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, propylene
a
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is a
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material
that is
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 easily recyclable and
cost
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affective
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effective
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. People can use it multiple times and would not
cost
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pollution
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. Unlike many other
non recyclable
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non-recyclable
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materials
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 that contain harmful
materials
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 and can lead to
increase
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increased
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 land and air
pollution
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.
Hence
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, investing in more
receylable
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recyclable
 forms of
materials
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 can have a good impact on the environment. In conclusion, I agree, that
plastic
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 shopping
bags
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 should be banned as they play a
deterimental
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detrimental
 role in
enironmental
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environmental
 issues leading to
pollution
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 of land and
sea
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. Since
,
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 they endanger many
of
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the
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apply
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marine life and ecosystems and
due to
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 the
prevelance
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prevalence
 of many
covenient
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convenient
 recyclable
materials
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 that can be used in place of
plastic
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that
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they
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are
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is
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also
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cost
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affective
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effective
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.

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grammar
Consider revising sentence structures for clarity and grammatical accuracy. For example, ensure subject-verb agreement and correct word forms.
content
Provide more specific examples to strengthen your argument. This will enhance the credibility of your points.
mechanics
Make sure to proofread for spelling and typographical errors, such as 'palstic,' 'enironment,' and 'receylable.'
content
Your essay presents a clear opinion on the topic and attempts to address both sides of the argument.
content
You demonstrate an understanding of the environmental impact of plastic bags, which is relevant to the topic.
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