The graph below shows the average growth in domestic products in wealthy countries, countries that have adopted a global approach to business and countries that have not.

The graph below shows the average growth in domestic products in wealthy countries, countries that have adopted a global approach to business and countries that have not.
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The bar chart indicates the average improvement in Indigenous products in rich
countries
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,
countries
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that have applied an international approach, and
countries
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have
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that have
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adopted
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a non-global
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way between
1960s
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and 1990s. As can be seen, affluent society's average of anniversary gross domestic product (
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) advancement has decreased in every decade. In the 1960s, even if their
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was almost 4.8%, which was over two times bigger than non-globalizers,
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number first went down to under 3.0% in the 1970s, and
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it continued to fall steadily. In the second community, globalizers, the average annual
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has shown a significant increase and it has reached a peak of 4.9%,
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growth was almost 2.5 times larger than wealthy
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and 3 times greater than non-universal in the 1990s. Non-globalisers'
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has demonstrated a nearly 1.0% rising, from 2.4% to 3.2%, in the 1970s, even though,
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improvement has fallen sharply toward under 1.0% in the 1980s. In the 1990s, their proportion showed an upward trend again

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Vocabulary: Replace the words countries, gdp with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "undefined" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: The word "fall" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "improvement" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "almost" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • trends
  • affluent nations
  • global business orientation
  • sustained growth
  • investment in technology
  • skilled labor
  • fluctuations
  • global trade
  • vulnerability
  • global market shifts
  • steady growth
  • decline
  • reliance on local markets
  • limited exposure
  • economic downturns
  • implications
  • economic policies
  • strategies
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