The two maps show the site of a college in 2006 and present day.

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The two maps below show the site of a

college

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in 2006 and the changes that happened in the present day.

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, the most development took place in the central and eastern parts of the

college

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, where new facilities have been added,

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the western area has remained largely unchanged. Prior to development, the

college

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consisted of two main

buildings

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connected by a path. There was a library in the northeast corner next to a car park, and a large

sports

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field occupied the southeastern area of the site. The

buildings

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and facilities were surrounded by trees, mainly in the northwestern part. As part of the development programme, some original features have been retained,

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as the

college

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buildings

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and the

sports

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field, though their surroundings have been altered. The path between the two

buildings

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was removed to make space for a new cafeteria,

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a new

sports

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centre has been constructed to the east of the

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field. Following construction, access to the

college

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has improved with the addition of a bus stop and a bike storage area near the road. The car park has been slightly reduced and repositioned.

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the site is now more developed, the layout still includes green areas and trees, suggesting an effort to balance new infrastructure with the existing environment.

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Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.

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Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 100%.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words college, buildings, sports with synonyms.

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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "show" in your introduction.

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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 8.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

217 words

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In some countries, fast food restaurants and supermarket is going money to schools to promote their products. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

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