The table below shows the average time and money spent at different types of restaurants. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting in the main features and make comparisons where relevant

The table below shows the average time and money spent at different types of restaurants. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting in the main features and make comparisons where relevant
IELTS Writing Task Chart for The table below shows the average time and money spent at different types of restaurants. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting in the main features and make comparisons where relevant
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The table illustrates the average
time
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and cost that the
customers
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spend on different types of
restaurants
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. The average price differed across the three
restaurants
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, and there
is
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was
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a difference in prices during
evening
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the evening
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and daytime.
Also
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, the
time
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spent eating depends on the type of restaurant the customer will eat in. The average spending on
lunch
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and
dinner
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is very different in each of the three
restaurants
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. The average cost the customer spends in fast-food
restaurants
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is 4.50 $ for
lunch
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and 5.0 $ for
dinner
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,
while
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at
cafeteria
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the cafeteria
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customers
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spend 7.00 $ and 9.50 $ on average. At sit-down
restaurants
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meals are more expensive,
customers
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typically pay twice the
lunch
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at fast-food
restaurants
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and more than
the
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apply
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threefold at
dinner
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. There is a noticeable difference in the
time
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spent eating in each of the presented
restaurants
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.
Lunch
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and
dinner
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at fast food
restaurants
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take only 20
minutes
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on average.
On the other hand
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, at the
cafeteria
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cafeteria,
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they take 30
minutes
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and 45
minutes
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. The highest
time
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is taken by the
customers
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at sit-down
restaurants
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, spending 45
minutes
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eating
lunch
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and 60
minutes
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eating
dinner
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.
To sum up
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, it depends on the choices of the
customers
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, and their preferences.
Who’s
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Who are
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willing to spend more on meals
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also
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apply
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will spend more eating them,
while
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those preferred to spend less on
restaurants
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also
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spend less
time
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eating them.

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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "also, while".
Contractions: Don't use contractions.
Basic structure: Change the second paragraph.
Basic structure: Change the fourth paragraph.
Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 70%.
Vocabulary: Replace the words time, customers, restaurants, lunch, dinner, minutes with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Only 4 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: The word "difference" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • The table provides data on
  • average time spent
  • fast-food restaurants
  • diners
  • cafés
  • fine dining establishments
  • average cost per person
  • dining experience
  • comparisons
  • relevant
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