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The pie charts below show how dangerous waste products are dealt with in three countries. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The pie charts show how three countries — the Republic of
Korea
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,
Sweden
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, and the United Kingdom — deal with dangerous
waste
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 using different
methods
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.
Overall
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, all three countries use underground disposal, incineration, and, to some extent, recycling or other
methods
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In particular
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,
Korea
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 mainly uses recycling, the UK prefers burying
waste
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,
while
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Sweden
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 uses a mix of approaches but still relies most heavily on underground
methods
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. In both the Republic of
Korea
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 and
Sweden
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, three main
methods
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 are used: recycling, underground disposal, and incineration.
However
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,
Korea
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 focuses more on environmentally friendly treatment, with 69% of
waste
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 being recycled — much higher than
Sweden
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’s 25%.
In contrast
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,
Sweden
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 buries 55% of its
waste
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 underground, which is more than double
Korea
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’s 22%. Incineration is the least used method in
Korea
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, at 9%,
whereas
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Sweden
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 burns a slightly larger amount, 20%. The United Kingdom follows a different pattern. It handles the vast majority of hazardous
waste
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 — 82% — by burying it underground. Unlike
Korea
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 and
Sweden
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, the UK does not recycle any of its dangerous
waste
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.
Instead
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, it uses chemical treatment and sea dumping, each for 8% of the total. Only 2% is incinerated, making it the
least used
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least-used
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 method in the UK.

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Basic structure: Change the fourth paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 70%.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words korea, sweden, waste, methods with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "show" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: Only 4 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.
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