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The maps below show the changes experienced by the town of Harton at rhe beginning of the 21st Century. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where necessary.

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The maps illustrate the developmental changes that
occured
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occurred
occur
 in the town of Harton from 2000 to 2009.
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, in 2009 there were many social amenities in the town compared to 2000.
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, many buildings were located to the Northwest of the River during
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 period of time. To start with, the residential areas significantly reduced over the nine years and by 2009, people entirely lived in the North Western region.
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, some of the land occupied by houses in 2000 was used for the construction of a shopping centre in 2009 on the western side of the river.
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, in 2000, the old town located in the north had been replaced by two learning institutions and offices by the end of 2009.
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 the woodland and the industrial complex location remained the same over the period, the woodland space significantly decreased in 2009
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 the industrial complex expanded significantly.

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