The charts below give information about the age of visitors from the UK to Spain in 1983 and in 2003.

The charts below give information about the age of visitors from the UK to Spain in 1983 and in 2003.
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The pie charts provide key information about
visitors
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age groups who are from the United Kingdom and visited Spain between the years 1983 and 2003. the units are measured in percentages.
Overall
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, it is clear from the charts that
visitors
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who were between the age of 35 and 54, and who were above the age of 55 were the most dominant population.
In addition
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, the
group
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aged 55 and older increased dramatically from what they were in 1983,
whereas
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the
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aged 35-54 declined to half in 2003.
According to
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what is shown, in 2003, the number of tourists who were between the ages of 16 to 24 increased by 10 per
cent
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in comparison to the same
group
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in 1983.
in contrast
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, in 2003 adults who were between the ages of 25 to 34 decreased by 8 per
cent
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from what they were in 1983. In terms of the kids who were under 15 years old had moderate change between the two years. as they were only 10 per
cent
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of all
visitors
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in 1983, even though
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group
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grew up to 12 per
cent
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they were the lowest
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in 2003.
On the other hand
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, the lowest
group
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of
visitors
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in 1983 was the
group
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between 16 to 24.

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