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The chart below shows information about different species of birds observed in Woodchuck County at different times of the year. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main information and making comparisons.

The chart below shows information about different species of birds observed in Woodchuck County at different times of the year. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main information and making comparisons.
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the table below illustrates and compares data about eight species of
birds
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 seen in a particular area at different seasons of the year
winter
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 and summer.
Overall
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, it is seen that more kinds of
birds
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 are observed in the summertime compared to the
winter
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 season which is understandable because more creatures adapt well to the warm summer conditions compared to harsh
winter
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 periods. Interestingly, Woodpeckers ,cardinals and crows are seen in both times of the year. In the
winter
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, the population of
birds
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such
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 as cardinals, crows,juncos and woodpeckers were reduced
due to
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 the unfavourable weather conditions. The information given in the table
also
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 suggests that the number of the different types of
birds
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 observed is influenced by both the timings of the year and the migration of various species. These changes are flexible over time and it
also
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 explains that nothing is cast in stone.

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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "also".
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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Vocabulary: Replace the words birds, winter with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "table" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "compares" was used 3 times.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • species
  • observed
  • population
  • seasonal
  • diversity
  • trends
  • anomalies
  • migration
  • unique
  • implications
  • biodiversity
  • data representation
  • percentage
  • comparison
  • increase
  • decrease
  • range
  • habitat
  • ecosystem
  • environmental changes
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