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The graph below gives information about household car ownership in Britain from 1990 - 2015. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant

The graph below gives information about household car ownership in Britain from 1990 - 2015. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant
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The line graph shows how many
families
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 in the UK owned zero, one, or two or more cars from 1990 to 2015, with a prediction until 2030. In 1990, most
families
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 had no car about 51%, and only a few had two or more cars around 12% Over time, fewer
families
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 had no car, and
this
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 number is expected to drop to about 15% by 2030. There was a small increase around 2010, but the
overall
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 trend is down.
Families
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 with two or more cars became more common.
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 the number was low in 2005, grew quickly and is expected to go over 40% by 2030. The number of
families
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 with one car went up and down. It reached
the
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 highest point in 2005 at around 55%, but the trend is not clear.

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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words families with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "trend" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
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