The chart below shows the percentage of females aged 16-25 in a particular country who participated in sports, compared to those who watched sports, in 2000.

The chart below shows the percentage of females aged 16-25 in a particular country who participated in sports, compared to those who watched sports, in 2000.
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The bar chart gives information about the proportion of women between the ages of 16 and 25 in a specific Nation who engaged in sports as opposed to those who viewed sports in the year 2000.
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, more females watched sporting
activities
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in contrast
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to those women who only participated in extra-curricular
activities
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. Most individuals both viewed and participated in Basketball
whereas
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horse riding and racing were the least engaged sport. In terms of those who observed a certain sporting event,tennis,gymnastics and basketball were the most preferred because they had 60%,20% and around 55% views respectively.
While
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other sporting
activities
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such
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as badminton,horse riding and racing and golf were least liked with about 5% and 10% in the same sequence. With regards to participation,more people enjoyed tennis,basketball and golf compared to gymnastics,badminton,horse riding and racing which had lower percentages
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statistics. Badminton and gymnastics were in the middle of the spectrum as participants both watched and took part in both
activities
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on an almost equal level.

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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
Vocabulary: Replace the words activities with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • participation
  • viewership
  • percentage
  • demographic
  • sports culture
  • societal norms
  • accessibility
  • influence
  • trends
  • implications
  • health benefits
  • community programs
  • initiatives
  • historical data
  • global comparisons
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