You just moved to a new city to begin a new job. write a letter to a friend. In your letter tell you friend about your job. describe the neighborhood where you will live. Invite him or her to visit you.

Dear Yash, I hope you're doing absolutely fantastic! I am beyond thrilled to inform you that I just moved to Montreal and right now I am working in Softcom organization, it is an IT-based company. Regarding my job, I'm working as a senior Java developer.

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, you know that Montreal is a well-known place for IT-based companies and my duties in

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organization are to provide web-based security, develop websites and solve database queries. On the other side, people are very friendly in my neighbourhood and they always warmly welcome visitors and new people in

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area.

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, the surroundings near my home are very beautiful and well organized by the government, we have Multipelx, Public Parks and many multi-cuisine restaurants as well. I really want to hang out with you in Montreal, it would be great if you visited here and we spend some time together. We will explore some historical buildings and streets and indulge in some mouthwatering cuisine in local restaurants and cafes. I look forward to hearing more from you. Yours Truly, Vairag.

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coherence and cohesion

Consider organizing the content in a more structured way and ensuring each paragraph focuses on a single main idea.

task achievement

Make sure to provide more details about your job responsibilities to enhance the clarity of your role.

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Use a more casual tone in your closing remarks to match the friendly nature of the letter.

positive

The letter has a warm and inviting tone which is suitable for a friend.

The Closing

The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.

Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.

Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)

Yours faithfully,

Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)

Yours sincerely,

Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)

Best regards,
Warm wishes,

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

8 paragraphs

177 words

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