The diagram below shows the process of making cheese. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. (Duc)

The diagram describes the

process

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of

cheese

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production in both traditional and modern methods.

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, the

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is linear

producing

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human-made

cheese

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which involves ten stages. It starts with raw milk with fermenting microorganisms and rennet

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added during the

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,

along with

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salt during the salting stage. Looking

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the diagram

detailly

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, in the traditional method, raw milk is treated with fermenting microorganisms, before rennet, an enzyme

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is added to initiate coagulation, forming

curds

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and

whey

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.

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in the industrial

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, milk first goes through pasteurization to eliminate harmful bacteria

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standardized and filtered before

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step. The

curds

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are

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cut, stirred, and cooked to separate them

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from the

whey

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.

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the

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are cut, stirred, and cooked to separate them from the

whey

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. The

whey

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is drained, and the

curds

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are processed

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. The

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then

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undergo milling, salting, and pressing. For fresh cheeses like cottage and cream

cheese

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, the

curds

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are directly packaged after salting. The main

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followed by pouring into

molds

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before being pressed

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to make

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making

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a round form. The additional

whey

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also

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be drained at

pressing

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the pressing

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stage. The

cheese

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is

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ripened over time, a step that varies in duration depending on the

cheese

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type, resulting in ripened

cheese

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ready

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being ready

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for consumption.