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The maps below describe an area before and after the construction of a hydroelectric power plant. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The maps below describe an area before and after the construction of a hydroelectric power plant. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
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The maps below describe an area before and after the construction of a hydroelectric power plant. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. The diagrams illustrate the transformation of a hydroelectric power plant
of
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 a specific place before and after.
Overall
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, the area witnessed a significant change, including additional space and the introduction of new facilities. Before development, the river
running
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ran
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 from north to south, in the middle between the forest on the left and the mountains on the right.
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, on the east of the mountains was a farm building,
provided
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that provided
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 water from the river to maintain the industrial process
and
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apply
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oppsite
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opposite
with
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the village. To go through the river, a little
brigde
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bridge
was built
and
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leading to
historic
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a historic
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 castle at the bottom on the left-hand and right behind the national park. After changing, a hydroelectric dam was built at the center of the picture and
coverted
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covered
 into a lake
in
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on
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 the north side,
whares
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where
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forest
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forests
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 and mountains remained the same.
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, farmland was replaced by a hotel,
while
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 the village and bridge stayed
at
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in
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 the first place.
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to
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, both
castle
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castles
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 which bring historical
values
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value
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 and
national
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the national
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 park were
contructed
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constructed
, adding a power plant and three transmission towers
surround
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apply
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