The table below shows expenditures on advertising of four car companies in the UK in 2002.

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The table illustrates the amount of money that four car

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spent on different forms of advertising in the UK in 2002.

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, all four companies in 2002 spent the most on TV advertising, spending an equal amount on Radio, and

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, cinema and outdoor advertising

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the least popular. In 2002, Cetirizine spent 70

million

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dollars

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, Renault spent 69

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dollars

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, Vauxhall spent 65

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dollars

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, and Rover spent the least of the four companies, 45

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dollars

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, on TV advertising. Meanwhile, press advertising is a little more money than TV advertising, Renault spent 45

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dollars

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, Rover spent 38

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dollars

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, the least spent for

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is Cetirizine with 12

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dollars

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Vauxhall

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and Vauxhall

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with 8

million

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Especially

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, all 4 companies spend with the amount of 15

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dollars

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for

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radio advertising. Among other forms, advertising in the cinema and outdoor advertising

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spent the least money, with less than 8

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dollars

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Vocabulary: Replace the words million, dollars with synonyms.

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Vocabulary: Only 3 basic words for charts were used.

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Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 3 times.

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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 5.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

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4 paragraphs

154 words

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The table below shows expenditures on advertising of four car companies in the UK in 2002.

Doctors in many countries are saying that people are not getting enough physical exercise. What are the causes of this? How can it be addressed?

Some people prefer to spend most of their time with friends. Other people prefer to be alone most of the time. Which way of life do you prefer? Use specific reasons to support your answer.

In their advertising, businesses nowadays usually emphasise that their products are new in some way. Why is this? Do you think it is a positive or negative development? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant exampes from your own knowledge or experience.

Some children spend hours every day on their smartphones. Why is this the case? Do you think this is a positive or a negative development?

Individuals can do nothing to improve the environment. Only governments and large companies can make a difference. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?