the pie chart shows the proportion of favourite social media channels.

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The pie chart presents detailed information about the proportion of people who prefer to use channels.

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the chart showed more or less proportion for different purposes. It is

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Facebook users,

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Pinterest approximately 6% over the given time. Looking at the details, starting with

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Facebook, at

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it showed almost 60 % at the beginning and plunged

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less than 40 % in 2013. The second trend namely, Twitter witnessed 21 % and after two years surpassed over a quarter. In 2011, LinkedIn consisted of 10 percent

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after a year from 10 % to 12 % and it got 15 % the

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between them was high for Google which experienced from 10% to 14%

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next remained years. When it comes to

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Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

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Lexical resource: 4.0

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the pie chart shows the proportion of favourite social media channels.

Many governments think that economic progress is their most important goal. Some people, however, think that other types of progress are equally important for a country. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

You were recently helped by an employee at the airport, write to the airport manager. In your letter:- - describe the problem - Talk about how you were helped - Suggest how to reward the employee

The number of students who choose to study mathematics at university is low. Why do you think this is? What can be done about this situation?