The graph below shows the percentage of Australian exports to four countries from 1990 to 2012.

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of Australian

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in Japan, the US, China and India between 1900 and 2012.

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, it is clearly seen that the proportion of the US, India and Japan experienced a steady decrease over the period with the exception of China which surged. Looking

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, the proportion of

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in India, which accounted for 3 % in 1990,

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slightly to 4 % in 2005

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and

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to 8 % by 2010. The ratio of

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in China, which amounted

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5 % in 2000, marginally raised to 10 % in 2005, and

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to 27 % by 2012. Probing ahead, the US witnessed a slight drop, decreasing from 12 % in 1990 to 7 % in 2012.

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, the percentage of

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in Japan, which comprised

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20 % in 1995, plunged to 16 % in 2000, and

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to 18 % by 2012.