The line graph shows the prison population in a European country between 1911 and 2001.

The line graph shows the prison population in a European country between 1911 and 2001.
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The line graph compares the changes in the prison population by gender in a certain European country at ten-year intervals from 1911 to 2001.
Overall
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, males were imprisoned more than their female counterparts. It is clearly seen that the number of male
prisoners
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continued to climb over time, the opposite was true for women illustrating a gradual decrease. It is apparent that
prisoners
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were nearly 19,000 in 1911. The number of jailed witnessed stability in 1921,
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however
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experienced a slight drop, decreasing to 10,000 in 1931.
Male
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The male
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prison population had risen gradually and reached approximately 20,000 in 1951. The chart stayed the same for the following 20 years before witnessing
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a skyrocket
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to 40,000 in the year 1981.
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, it had risen and hit a peak of 45,000
at the end
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of the period.
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other
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graph afore, the figure for females was much lower with the highest point above 3,000 in the initial period.
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,
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this
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number diminished and achieved its bottom at around 550
prisoners
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in 1941, it experienced a slight rise to 1,000 in the next 40 years. In the
ultimate
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final
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year, the quantity of female
prisoners
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grew slightly to 2,000.

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Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 75%.
Vocabulary: Replace the words prisoners with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "graph" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "gradual" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "slight" was used 3 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • fluctuation
  • steady rise
  • sharp decline
  • plateau
  • spike
  • dip
  • trend
  • peak
  • period
  • decade
  • stable
  • significant change
  • historical context
  • socio-political factors
  • implications
  • legal system
  • economy
  • social services
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