The graph below shows the average daily sales of selected food items at the Brisk Café, by season. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph below shows the average daily sales of selected food items at the Brisk Café, by season. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The bar chart illustrates the proportion of
sales
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of five different types of menus by two seasons:
summer
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and
winter
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at the Brisk Cafe.
Overall
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,
it is clear that
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in
winter
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the
sales
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figure sees the highest number in the products namely, hot
coffee
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and soup
whereas
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that of
summer
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accounts for less than a half at most as the top position: iced
coffee
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.
Firstly
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, looking at the data
of
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for
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hot
coffee
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and iced
coffee
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, there is a significant gap in the number of sellings. The most popular item in
winter
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is hot
coffee
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at 75%, which is a threefold increase that of ice cream at 25%.
In contrast
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, the
best sold
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menu in
summer
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is iced
coffee
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, making up 40% of all, which is less popular than soup sold in
winter
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. Regarding the second most popular servings, the figure for ice cream
sales
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in
summer
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and that
of
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for
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soup in
winter
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was 35% and a half respectively. Turning to the
sales
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number of
salad
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, the proportion of
sales
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in both seasons is exactly the same, constituting a fourth of the total.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words sales, summer, winter, coffee with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "proportion" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • Average daily sales
  • Selected food items
  • Seasonal variation
  • Trends
  • Fluctuations
  • Comparison
  • Preferences
  • Anomalies
  • Promotions
  • Stock adjustment
  • Seasonal influence
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