Semi-Formal Letter Prompt: "You recently attended a workshop and would like to thank the organizer. Write a letter to the organizer. In your letter, you should: 1.Express your gratitude for the workshop. 2.Describe what you learned or found valuable. 3.Suggest how the workshop could be improved."

Dear Sir, I hope
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letter finds you well and in good spirits. I am writing
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letter to share my whole experience of attending your
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, which was held
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month in our local community centre.
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, I would like to thank you for hosting the event and putting in so much effort and dedication to make
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event successful. I was really impressed by the title of your
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"Sustainable Environmental Growth," which addressed environmental concerns. I found it really beneficial. I am doing volunteer work to make individuals aware of environmental problems and encourage them to rely on the 3Rs: recycle, reduce and reuse. But by attending your
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, I learnt other ways to encourage them
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as car-pooling, reducing consumption and waste management etcetera. Undoubtedly, your
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was quite impressive.
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, adding audio-visual aids could easily promote sustainability and people would see how they are creating waste and become aware of the benefits of using solar-powered devices by reducing their reliance on traditional power sources. I hope you will consider my suggestions. I am looking forward to hearing from you soon. Yours Faithfully, Sam

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Coherence and Cohesion
Consider breaking down complex sentences into simpler ones to enhance clarity.
Task Achievement
Expand a bit more on what you learned from the workshop for a more detailed response.
Coherence and Cohesion
Your letter has a clear structure with distinct paragraphs, each addressing a specific point.
Task Achievement
The tone is appropriate for a semi-formal letter, balancing professionalism with friendliness.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • gratitude
  • appreciate
  • valuable
  • beneficial
  • insightful
  • networking
  • hands-on
  • constructive feedback
  • interactive elements
  • diverse topics
  • Q&A sessions
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