The graph below gives information about percentage of the population in four Asian countries living in cities from 1970 to 2020, with predictions for 2030 and 2040

The graph below gives information about percentage of the population in four Asian countries living in cities from 1970 to 2020, with predictions for 2030 and 2040
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The chart shows data about the
number
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of people living in the
Philippines
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and
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apply
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Malaysia, Thailand, and Indonesia from 1970 to 2020, with expectations for 2030 and 2040.
Overall
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, all the countries saw an increase in the population, and Malaysia had the highest percentage over all the years. The
Philippines
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started at the lowest
number
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and ended up with a steep rise. Malaysia was the second highest country, but from the beginning of the period to 1990, the
residents
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rose from 30% to around 45%.
However
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, there was a significant growth between 2000 to 2020 with more than 70%,
while
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Malaysia’s population is expected to grow considerably. Indonesia started below 20% and rose to 30% by 2000.
Furthermore
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, in 2020, Indonesia saw a dramatic increase from 30% to 50%, and the
number
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will continuously climb
until
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60%. In the
Philippines
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, the figure plateaued at around 31% between 1970 and 1980.
However
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, the
number
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of people who live there grew steeply by 50%. By 2010, there was a slight drop in the percentage, around 40%.
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, the
Philippines
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sharply increased from 2010 until the rest of the predicted years.
While
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Thailand had a gradual climb from 1970 to 1990, by 2020, the
number
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plateaued around 30%.
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, the
number
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of people who will live in Thailand is projected to rise to above 40%.

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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "furthermore, however, while".
Vocabulary: Replace the words number, philippines with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "climb" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "increase" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "rise" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 4 times.
Vocabulary: The word "steep" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • graph
  • percentage
  • population
  • Asian countries
  • living in cities
  • 1970
  • 2020
  • predictions
  • 2030
  • 2040
  • introduction
  • overview
  • trend
  • body paragraph
  • compare
  • predicted percentages
  • summarize
  • closing statement
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