the table below shows consumer spendings on different items in 5 countires in 2002.

the table below shows consumer spendings on different items in 5 countires in 2002.
IELTS Writing Task Chart for the table below shows consumer spendings on different items in 5 countires in 2002.
The table illustrates the proportion of expenditure on three groups of different items in five
countries
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( Ireland, Italy, Spain, Sweden, and Turkey) in the year 2002. The units of measurement are percentages.
Overall
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, all
countries
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spent more proportion on food, drinks, and tobacco,
while
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the least on leisure and education.  Turkey was observed to spend the highest (32.14%) among all the five
countries
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on food, drinks, and tobacco, followed by Ireland that was 28.91%. The rest of the three
countries
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spent under 20% on the same. On clothing and footwear, all the
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spent under 10%, Italy being the highest, which was 9%. Spain is reported to spend just under 2% on leisure and education.
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, Ireland spends just above 2%.Italy and Sweden's expenses were similar, that was 3.20% and 3.22% respectively. Turkey was reported to spend the highest among all the five
countries
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on leisure and education, which was 4.35%.

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Basic structure: Change the fifth paragraph.
Vocabulary: Replace the words countries with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Only 5 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: The word "proportion" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fifth paragraph.
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