The pie charts below show favorite social media channels from 2011 to 2013. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The pie charts indicate the popular social media channels (Facebook, Twitter, Linkedln, Google+ and Pinterest) between 2011 and 2013.

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, Facebook ranked first as the greatest user of all time

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Pinterest shows a small number of users.

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, LinkedIn and Google were gradually expanded when compared with the first given year. Inititally, Facebook recorded the biggest platform of 59% in 2011

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, it significantly decreased in the next period from 2011 ( 59%) 2012 (49%) and 2013 ( 38%) respectively.

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, the proportion of Pinterest was just 5% in 2011 but it minimal increase in 2012 (6%) and 2013 (8%).

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, LinkedIn recorded a rising number of 2-3% which was similar to Google+ grew about 4-5% in the beginning LinkedIn at 10% and Google+at 5% but in the

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grew to 14% which is close to an average of Lankedln.

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, the shares of Twitter in 2011 were circa 21% and it slowly accumulated to 25% in 2013.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 8.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

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