As computers are being used more and more in a classroom, there will soon be no role for the teacher in the classroom. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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essential for educational purposes. Some

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that

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will be no longer needed in the classroom.

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essay will show why I believe that

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are crucial to

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the standard level of education.

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, technologies offer different ways to

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, allowing

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easier,

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is an essential tool for

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students

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work.

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provide knowledge and

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useful for many situations.

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they are just machines to contribute

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daily tasks,

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represents

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both sides of education, not only knowledge, they are crucial to educate children and contribute to

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moral behaviour.

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support individuals

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lessons or complex research,

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this type

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of activities,

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responsible

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character skills.

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values that

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and I strongly support how important they are.

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reason that I believe that educational professionals will not be replaced by machines,

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the fact that

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need

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their guides.

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individuals to reach their best version.

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their

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during the whole course,

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evaluate plans,

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the growth of their children. Working as a team with parents,

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leads to

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youth skills.

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, following

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examples contributes to my belief that they are vital and cannot

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by

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. In conclusion,

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some

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argue that

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are crucial to improve educational methods and

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uncountable benefits to evaluate

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humanity, I am convinced that

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personal communication between

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and

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unreplaceable

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and contributes significantly to

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impacts. In my opinion, tutors

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indispensable for life and

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one of the most important

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in our journey.