The table show The contribution of various economic sector to xcountry gross domestic product in 2016, 2017 and 2018.

The table show The contribution of various economic sector to xcountry gross domestic product in 2016, 2017 and 2018.
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The given table presents the investment of different economic sectors in their country during three years. As an
overall
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review,
Agriculture
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showed the lowest percentage of contribution, but it rose by the end of the period.
Whereas
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Service
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had the highest percentage, but
slided
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slide
slid
down and became 10
percents
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lower than it was at the beginning. In 2016
Agriculture
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accounted for 13
percent
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of the total GDP, Industry was 9
percent
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higher and
Service
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was 65
percent
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, which made it the first in the rating. In 2017
Agriculture
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had a negative tendency and became 2
percent
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lower than it was,
while
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the second sector slightly increased and became 25
percent
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. The same as the
Agriculture
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sector,
Service
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had a downward trend. In 2018 agronomics rose and became 15
percent
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,
Industry
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The Industry
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showed a rise too – it became 5
percents
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percent
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higher than it was in 2017.
By contrast
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,
Service
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decreased and became 55
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percent
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per cent
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