The chart shows the results of surveys in one African country asking teenagers the main reasons for using their phones between 2016 and 2019. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

IELTS Writing Task Chart for The chart shows the results of surveys in one African country asking teenagers the main reasons for using their phones between 2016 and 2019. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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report derives from the above pie charts which

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enumerate

the outcomes of a survey studying why

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adolescents are using their cell phones during a four years period. As an initial overview,

it is clear that

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teens were using phones for four major reasons: social networking, emailing, taking photos or videos and making calls. Not only is

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point clear but

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it was common

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them to use these devices for social networking, as its lowest percentage was 48% in 2017. In 2016,

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quarter of the

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refers

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to emailing.

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, only 15% of them refer to

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and 10%

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calls. In 2017, the proportion of both social networking and emailing decreased slightly.

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, the percentage of calls

increaesed

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increased

and reached 13%. Using

digital

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camera

maintain

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stable

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. In 2018, more than the half of answers were for social networking.

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, both emailing and calling dropped.

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, the usage

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camera

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grew and became 18%. In 2019,

this

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country

experiend

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experienced

the highest networking

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and the lowest in calls.

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meeting the goal of 7 or more
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Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 4.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

172 words

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The chart shows the results of surveys in one African country asking teenagers the main reasons for using their phones between 2016 and 2019. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

People in the current generation are not fit and active. What are the problems with this issue? What can be done to encourage people to participate in sports activities?

Some people feel that the private lives of celebrities should not be openly shared by the media. To what extent do you agree or disagree

As most people spend a major part of their adult life at work, job satisfaction is an important element of individual wellbeing. What factors contribute to job satisfaction? How realistic is the expectation of job satisfaction for all workers?

By punishing murderers with the death penalty, society is also guilt of committing murder. Therefore, life in prison is a better punishment for murderers. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?