The graph below gives information about the sales of the three most commly purchased items in a particular bakery for the year 2014

The line chart displayed the expenditure on sales of bread,

buns

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and

pies

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in a bakery store in 2014. In general, selling of bread and

buns

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were more

valued

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than

of

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apply

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pies

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almost

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for almost

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the whole year,

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,

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of the year,

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buns

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the buns

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value dropped strongly, even lower than

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pies

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the pies

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. It can be clearly seen that at the beginning of 2014, the money of selling bread

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the highest, at $80,000. After that, it decreased dramatically to $ 45,000 and

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fluctuated until September before rising again to the same value compared to January in December.

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the selling

buns

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stood at $40,000 in January, it increased sharply by $30,000 in May

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and remained at the same value for 4 months before going down strongly to $30,000

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of the year. Turning to the

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profit-making of common items, spending on

pies

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went up slowly from $10,000 to $20,000 between January and October.

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, it rose sharply to $40,000 in December.