You have planned to study a distance course online from an international university. Write a letter to the university officer requesting information about the course. In your letter, write: Why you are writing Which course it is and when you plan to study Why you want to study this course

Dear Sir or

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Madam

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information

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greeting and closing

Ensure you start the letter with a proper greeting and end with a closing statement.

single idea per paragraph

Organize your thoughts into clear paragraphs, each focusing on a single idea or point.

complete response

Clarify your main points regarding the course, such as specific details about what you want to learn and why it interests you.

content

Your enthusiasm for the subject of the course is evident, which is a positive aspect of your writing.

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.

‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 4.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

7 paragraphs

186 words

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