You recently went to a movie theatre to enjoy a movie, but unfortunately, you left your jacket there. Write a letter to the manager of the movie theatre about the jacket. In your letter, describe the jacket describe where you were seated explain what you want the manager to do about it

Dear Mr or Mrs. Manager, I am writing to inform you about my
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left in your movie theater.
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was advised to go to the theatre with friends , so we chose your theatre because of its location . At that time , the weather was a bit cold , so
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took my
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which had a bright yellow color easy to notice . I was sitting in a 21A seat and inside of the theatre was average temperature , so
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put the
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on the seat next to mine .
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, it was made of original leather , it was my favourite one . If you could help me to find it ,
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would be very happy . Can you ask one of your employees to check the following location of my
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I will be waiting for your answer , please find it . Yours faithfully, John Wick

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Task Achievement
Add more details about what you want the manager to do. For example, you could specify how you would like to be contacted if the jacket is found.
Coherence and Cohesion
Make sure to use consistent formatting, such as capitalizing the first letter of each sentence and proper nouns to enhance clarity.
Coherence and Cohesion
Try to generate smoother transitions between your ideas to improve the overall flow of the letter. For example, you can use words/phrases such as 'furthermore' or 'additionally'.
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The description of the jacket was clear and vivid, making it easy to visualize.
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The structure of the letter was logical, effectively introducing the issue before elaborating on the details.
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