The graph below provides information on the nuber of students from the US, UK and Australia who studied in other countries between 2002 and 2007.

The graph below provides information on the nuber of students from the US, UK and Australia who studied in other countries between 2002 and 2007.
IELTS Writing Task Chart for The graph below provides information on the nuber of students from the US, UK and Australia who studied in other countries between 2002 and 2007.
The graph illustrates information about the number of
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students who are studying in other countries,
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they are from the UK, US and Australia from 2002 to 2007. The numbers are in thousands.
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, all the lines were almost identical all the time,
only
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some little differences. The peak for each year was humanity from the US, meanwhile, the minimum was Australian citizens.
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with, the count of children from the UK has changed more than others.
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to say, first 2 years it was the same, as it was 30, but after 2003, it slightly decreased
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10 and became 20.
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, the minimum and
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line
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lines
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were similar
all
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in all
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the eras.
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, society
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in
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the US reached its lowest point, in 2004,
around
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at around
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45.
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At
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the end and in the
beginning
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beginning,
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it was 50.
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, Australians's points were the the same all the years, except 2003 and 2004. In both of these
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it was less than 10.

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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
Conclusion: The conclusion is too long.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "information" in your introduction.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • trend
  • comparison
  • notable
  • peaks
  • drops
  • pattern
  • outlier
  • data
  • potential reasons
  • increase
  • decrease
  • speculate
  • long-term trends
  • provided information
  • analyze
  • overall
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