One school of thought considers that
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of individual
as birthdays, anniversaries, accomplishments etcetera are
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waste of money. But another school of thought believes that it is required to build a strong relationship among family members and at the community level too. I will explain both sides
my opinion in the upcoming paragraphs.
, I will explain the benefits of celebrating personal occasions. Celebrating the special day of a family member expresses the care, and love of family towards that person which will ultimately build or improve the emotional bond among them.
, in
busy lifestyle, through
,
have a good time to spend with their loved ones
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and rejuvenate themselves by getting out of their daily routines.
, we all are social beings, we are living in societies, and working with them, so there must be a good understanding and co-operation among them,
,
are a perfect time when pupils get the opportunity to meet each other in social gatherings, share their joys and important achievements with them, which proves fruitful to maintain harmony in neighbourhood.
, some
linked private
to the unnecessary use of savings. The foremost reason is that, in
gimmick world,
are celebrating their own times as grand functions. In each family, generally, 4-6
are living, which means at least 4-6 grand ceremonies each year would cost a lot to them. More concerning is its impact on the society. As a part of society, other
living in the surroundings are
expected to have similar
, resulting in, some families indulging in financial debt because they cannot afford
grand parties, but to survive in the communities they have to unwillingly perform
activities.
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celebrating individual
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are actually in favour of celebrating social
as religious or cultural festivals, where
can contribute and enjoy together which saves the societies from additional expenses and would help to create real social bonds between them.
In conclusion, I would wrap up my essay with my opinion by saying that even though public functions are a wise choice to save money and eliminate the burden of private parties, personal
can not be removed completely from the societies as these are
important to show respect and affection towards others,
, pupils should celebrate them in a simple and decent manner ensuring everyone could celebrate their personal times free of worries.