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The graph below shows the different modes of transport used to travel to and from work in one European city in 1960, 1980 and 2000.

The graph below shows the different modes of transport used to travel to and from work in one European city in 1960, 1980 and 2000.
The bar chart provides key information about the variety of transportation used to travel in one European region in three years 1960, 1980 and 2000. The units are measured in percentages.
Overall
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, it is clear from the graph that buses were the most popular method to drive to travel in all years except in 2000.
In addition
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, the car was a significant part of travel especially in 2000,
whereas
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 in 1960, the tiniest portion of people were riding a car.
According to
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 what is shown in 2000, all transport modes were the highest used compared to other years.
Hence
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, cars were reaching around 37 travellers.
In contrast
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, the bus had the smallest rate around 15 commuters. In 1960, the bus had a dominantly high number of passengers roughly 38 and for the car, it was a minor used around 6 travellers and that perhaps led to conserving their fuel and utilises the bus for relocating to other nations. In terms of 1980, there was an equivalent number of people who were travelling but the number of trains
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a little higher around 25 humans.

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